Friday, 15 April 2016

We have been learning how to do advertising Kaley,Jaime and I have done a ad and we all hope you enjoy


  1. Thank's Caitlan,
    For commenting on my blog, know I am going to comment on your blog. So there is a feedback for you and that Is that you did't put enough information in. But there was lot's of song in the background.But the thing I liked was lisening to the song because those are my best songs so yeah.
    By Tui

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  3. Hi Caitlin this is really great but next time you should take out the background music so i can hear you loud and clear but really nice work

    1. Hi Reed thanks for the feedback will do next time
      i liked how you put your blog link with the comment

    2. hi caitlan I like how you tried to keep it like an add but maybe you could swap out the photos and a little less music and more talking
      thanks caitlyn


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