Narrator: (Paige was in the middle of jazzercise while watching Christopher walkman marathon on her tv she was about to finish when she heard a meow she looked out the window and saw a thin cat-like tail she opened up the window as the cat walked right in without a doubt not even stopping to sniff the surroundings she walked to the kitchen and started meowing)
Milo:“meow”
(She's at the pantry she obviously wanted food)
Paige:“Hello kitty”
Milo: “Meow”
Narrator: (Paige opened the cupboard and tried to find the most cat-like thing in there she finds some jerky bacon she places it strip by strip outside on the deck she shuts the sliding door and gets back to her jazzercise then she hears a meow)
Paige: “oh there's that”
Milo: “Meeeeoooowwww”
Paige: “cat again”
Hello Caitlan. Was this the unlikely character combinations that you did with Mrs Gibson? I like how you put in the characters that were speaking before they spoke but I wonder if you could write it more like a play. Plays usually have the speaker written as a heading with a colon before writing their dialogue. It would be great to also remember to check your punctuation before posting to your blog.
ReplyDeleteCheers,
Mr McAulay